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Ouran High - Gift

Matsumoto Jun

Title: Gift
Rating: G
Genre: General / Romance
Pairings or Characters: Hikaru/Haruhi
Warnings: This one-shot has very subtle context. Feel free to read between the lines.
Summary: He creates his greatest masterpiece. And hates it.

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The moonlight streamed into his makeshift office, spilling into the private room through the open balcony windows. A desk light was lit, providing little accompaniment to the natural glow from the moon.

 

Shirt unbuttoned, and still in silk boxers, he sat at his desk, feeding the soft fabric into the machine. The needle drove forward into the silky material, the white thread nearly invisible against the virgin coloured cloth. His fingers gently tugged, pulling a knob at the back of the machine to lift the needle. He snipped, adjusted, and started a new seam.

 

His hands trembled.

 

This was his gift.

 

It was made from satin cloth. The glossy surface gleamed in the dim lighting. She was quite like satin herself.  She was the luster atop his world that was dull and bleak. Like satin, the more she interwove herself within himself, the more lustrous his world seemed. Yet satin is always glossier on the surface, and duller on the back...

 

This... was his gift.

 

It was strapless. The neckline was popular for his clients seeking a more stylish and versatile look. She always held that quality naturally. She would frame a sensuous piece of her soul right above her heart, blunt and open for the world to see.

 

This was his... gift.

 

It featured an A-line cut. It would flatter her well, fitted at the bodice and flaring from the waist. Once he past the hidden and secure caverns she had tried to lock away, her personality flared with a vengeance – growing and expanding until it reached its end.

 

Was it a gift?

 

It was draped in organza. She had a talent for being predictably transparent. Despite her poor attempts to veil true feelings and emotions, one could undoubtedly see past the clear shield she tried to drape herself in.

 

It was a wedding dress.

 

Hikaru Hitachiin was the king of fashion. He understood the difference between Alencon, Battenberg, schiffli, and venise lace. From taffeta to tulle, and ball gown to bustle, he could talk people into the ground about his area of expertise. He understood clothing. He understood fabric. However, what he was a master in had nothing to do with the problem he longed to solve.

 

He yearned to comprehend Haruhi. He yearned to know the woman behind the luster and dullness. He yearned to know why her soul was blank to him. He yearned to discover when her secrets would end. He yearned to know why she tried to hide, when her true honesty was the release he wanted. She was the white in his world of pure black.

 

He lifted the scissors. Snip.

 

The sewing machine slowly hummed into silence.

 

Hikaru lifted his creation up before him. It was possibly the most inspirational piece he had made yet.

 

He hated it.

 

Hikaru crushed the soft cloth in his hand abusively.

 

Eyes shining, his gaze wandered over to the embossed paper pinned to the back of his door.

 

In soft, cursive print, it said:

 

On Friday November 17, 2006

you are cordially invited to join

Haruhi and Kyoya

in their exchanging of vows.

 

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End.

 


Terminology:

A-Line: A dress with a fitted bodice that gradually flares from the waist.

Organza: A delicate, sheer fabric, often layered or worn over another fabric because of its transparent quality.

Need more? Just ask.



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Comments

( 19 comments — Leave a comment )
[info]fire_fly12 wrote:
Nov. 16th, 2006 02:33 pm (UTC)
response
Wow! This is very good! I love the vocabulary you used and the story had great flow. Good job!
[info]saysthebrash wrote:
Nov. 16th, 2006 02:38 pm (UTC)
Re: response
Thanks for your response! =)
[info]gem2niki wrote:
Nov. 17th, 2006 12:17 am (UTC)
*falls over at the ending*

The way you described the clothes and sewing sounds so elegant X3;; I'm heartbroken at the end tho haha........
[info]saysthebrash wrote:
Nov. 17th, 2006 04:49 am (UTC)
Thanks. I tried to parallel the clothing to her personality. I don't know how well that turned out though. =P

Thanks for your comment.
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[info]saysthebrash wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2006 01:05 am (UTC)
Thanks for your review. It made my day shine. =)
[info]yamikinoko wrote:
Nov. 19th, 2006 10:50 pm (UTC)
Oh my...
This was really good. ^^ It had a great impact at the end and overall, the tone was absolutely wonderful. ^^ Great job! ^^

Oh yea... Umm... Would you be interested in joining hc_flashfic? ^^ You write really well and we'd love to have you!! ^^ The requests are currently open so just come and post your request!! ^^ Alright? ^^ We're looking forward to you joining! ^^

./MshRm;`
[info]saysthebrash wrote:
Nov. 20th, 2006 01:04 am (UTC)
Re: Oh my...
Thank you!

Lol, I'd love to join! I just read through the guidelines, and to tell you the truth, I have a pretty busy schedule. Sometimes I barely have time to myself. Is it possible to join, but on months I know its going to be hectic for me to request in advance to not be in the next months selection -- but still be able to join for the month after?

I don't want to be such a bother with this, but this really appeals to me, however I know I am very logged down with real life.
[info]qing_yun wrote:
Nov. 22nd, 2006 02:15 am (UTC)
Re: Oh my...
Heh, first of all, lovely fic. :) Second, I concur with Kinoko - I'm the other mod, the shameless and intractably officious one - we'd be honored to have you join. Don't worry about the requesting thing. Just sign up for the months that you can do. Frankly, I'm usually late when it comes to flashfics, too, so we won't really care. :) I hope you'll think about it.

(Renata)
[info]saysthebrash wrote:
Nov. 25th, 2006 05:19 am (UTC)
Re: Oh my...
Lol, okay well I joined the community (i apologize in advance for the lack of capitalization. my shift and caps lock is effed right now), so I'll definitely put in an application when the right time rolls around. thanks to the both of you again for inviting me to join. =)
[info]qing_yun wrote:
Nov. 25th, 2006 06:48 am (UTC)
Re: Oh my...
Whee! :) Ah, not a problem. Sign up for the months that you can do. We start the requests post on the fifteenth of each month, but you have until the thirtieth or thirty first to sign up.

(Renata)
[info]yamikinoko wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2006 11:11 pm (UTC)
Re: Oh my...
As Renata already said everything... XD thanks for joining. XD and I can't seem to use my shift key... =.= Sorry about the lack of punctuation.

./MshRm;`
[info]mahochan1 wrote:
Nov. 24th, 2006 07:17 pm (UTC)
Hi! I read your story a few weeks ago and wanted to come back and comment but got busy so here I am now. :) i wanted to say that I really liked the way you portrayed the mystery and deep emotions in this story. I enjoyed it very much. ^^
[info]saysthebrash wrote:
Nov. 25th, 2006 05:12 am (UTC)
Aww! Thank you! That totally made my day! I'm glad you appreciated this. =)
[info]saysthebrash wrote:
Nov. 25th, 2006 05:38 am (UTC)
Oh, and congratulations on your fic! =)
[info]mahochan1 wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2006 05:02 am (UTC)
Thank you, congrats to you too! :)
[info]the_lady_sakura wrote:
Jan. 3rd, 2007 07:03 pm (UTC)
Awwww! This is beautiful! I love your vocabulary and the ending is great. It made me sad. Poor Hikaru :(

Wonderful story, keep it up!
[info]saracakes wrote:
Jul. 7th, 2007 03:31 pm (UTC)
Awweeee ;_;

*pets Hikaru* Poor hikaruuuu.

I loved this, it was so well written, BRILLIANT I SAY! BRILLIANT~
[info]neko11lover wrote:
Aug. 20th, 2007 01:46 pm (UTC)
Poor Hikaru! T_T nice fic, though. i wouldn't want it to end in any other way.
[info]saysthebrash wrote:
Aug. 20th, 2007 07:06 pm (UTC)
thanks. I''m actually a fan of the "he-didn't-get-the-girl" stories, or the "s/he-dies-in-the-end" stories, lol.
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